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Granica

Postprzez Edyta Staszewska Wt, 26.08.2008 12:10

[i[color=green]]Moja dusza pogrąża się w mroku


krok po kroku
oddalasz się ode mnie


jesteś przy granicy
dobra i zła


nie wiesz która ja zwycięży


żal mi tylko dzieciny
co w twym łonie śpi


bo ty krzywdzisz
zdradzasz
kpisz


dlaczego właśnie ty


granica coraz bliższa
przebudzenie i świt nadchodzą
otwieram coraz szerzej oczy


a dziecina dalej w twym łonie śpi
ciiiii


bo i ona kiedyś otworzy oczy.


Sosnowiec 21.08.A.D.2008
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Postprzez Nostalgija N, 31.08.2008 20:54

hmmm nie rozumiem do końca tego wiersza...
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Postprzez Edyta Staszewska Pn, 01.09.2008 14:30

Nostalgija napisał(a):hmmm nie rozumiem do końca tego wiersza...


:? :? :? podpowiedź :
podpadła mi siostrunia która jest w ciąży :roll: :roll: :roll:
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Postprzez Nostalgija Pn, 01.09.2008 16:52

ahaaaa no ciążę podejrzewałam ale że siostra to nie.
pozdrawiam
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Postprzez Edyta Staszewska Pn, 01.09.2008 20:00

Nostalgija napisał(a):ahaaaa no ciążę podejrzewałam ale że siostra to nie.
pozdrawiam


:?: :?: :?: zdrada której się nie spodziewałam :( :( :( :(
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Postprzez Nostalgija Pn, 01.09.2008 22:30

zdarza się nie ma sensu o tym rozmyślać
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Przenoszę wiersz

Postprzez Edyta Staszewska Śr, 03.09.2008 08:00

Dzięki za odpowiedzi. Kopiuję temat do mojej twórczości. Pozdrawiam.
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Re: Granica

Postprzez welfareheals Śr, 13.10.2021 12:27

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